Preview of our rough cut

Unfortunately when I had to show our film to our class our sound was not working so I could not show them our film so far with our sound track that I had previously created also I had not yet recorded our narration. This was the main criticisms from the class. Another criticism I received was that in one close up shot of our film our character looked as if she was smiling where I was trying to create a sad feeling. To correct this I swapped this clip for another one which I had previously filmed. Overall the class said that they liked the idea of the the film and would like to see the whole film if it was made.